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    Client Success Story: P.J. O’Dwyer Entertains While Educating

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    Just because a book is fiction doesn’t mean it can’t deal with some serious topics. Author P. J. O’Dwyer believes writers are entrusted to entertain as well as educate, which became the motivation behind the Fallon Sisters Trilogy. First in the series is her debut book, Relentless, which published in April 2012. The second book, Defiant, has just been released by Black Siren Books.

    In Defiant, O’Dwyer’s main character is a victim of domestic violence, and the danger follows her even after she tries to start a new life. Kate Fallon, a Maryland farm girl turned trial lawyer, practices in the affluent Annapolis law arena and is married to multimillionaire Jack Reynolds, the U. S. Attorney of Maryland. Everyone thinks she’s got it all, but behind closed doors, Jack is as cruel as he is intelligent, as controlling as he is handsome. When his tirades turn physical, Kate must fight for her life. Her efforts to leave him will take her down a rabbit hole to secrets she doesn’t fully understand, and that Jack will kill to suppress.

    Two years later, Kate, now living as Charlie Robertson, begins to fall for a mysterious and sexy guy named Nick, even though she knows it’s not right to trust him. Love won’t save either one of them if she discovers his true identity or doesn’t give him what he came for. His boss won’t tolerate failure.

    O’Dwyer also delves into another kind of abuse in Relentless, where her main character, Bren, runs a horse rescue operation, saving horses from slaughter. Now a cause near and dear to her heart, O’Dwyer donates between 10% and 50% of her book sales to horse rescue organizations. This mission became one of the reasons she decided to self-publish.

    Self-Publishing Opens Opportunities

    “Relentless tackles the controversial topic of horse slaughter. After much research, and having a love for animals, I wanted to assist horse rescues with their mission of rescue, rehabilitation, and education. With traditional publishing, I wouldn’t be afforded the opportunity to help this noble cause. Self-publishing offers more royalties per sale of each book, which in turn allows me to donate more,” O’Dwyer explains.

    Another benefit of self-publishing—she knew she could take control of her own destiny. “After months of emotional highs and lows following the submission of 40+ queries, I received a mix of rejections and requests for partial and full manuscripts from literary agents, all subject to their timeline.”

    Today, O’Dwyer is not only a published author, but also the CEO and Publisher of Black Siren Books. “It’s a title I’m proud to own,” she says. “Having the ability to oversee each step of publication for my books is very fulfilling. Having my fingerprint on each stage, from editing, copyediting, formatting, and my favorite, the illustration of the cover, gave me the opportunity to learn how to manage a publishing company.”

    She also appreciates being able to hold on to the rights for her books. “I will always own my book and have complete control, including movie rights. And control is key for me.”

    Assembling the Right Team

    PJ_ODwyer_cutoutEven as chief of her own publishing company, or perhaps because she plays this role, O’Dwyer knew that she couldn’t do it all. She understood that to publish a book worthy of her time and financial investments, she needed a talented editing team. “I wanted people who could assist me in creating a publishing process similar to any heavy-hitting publisher from New York. Basically, I wanted to be afforded every opportunity for success, and it started with Ally and her team of professional editors and copyeditors.

    “Developmental and copyediting go hand-in-hand. I realized early on that it is not enough to have one without the other,” she explains. “A novel is a tapestry. Strands of plot, back-story, and sub-plot are woven together to create a world where your reader will become one with the characters. But one loose thread of inconsistent plot or a misspelled word can bring them out of your story with one resounding thought—amateur. Not to say readers aren’t forgiving. We are all human, after all. But a book riddled with these issues is unacceptable, if you want to be successful.”

    To make sure she gave her readers the best reading experience, she looked for more than just experience and brainpower when she chose her editors. “The most important element is chemistry. I found Ally very personable and professional, not to mention she has a knack for catching those little idiosyncrasies that I, as an author, seem to miss, having been too close to the project. The result was a professionally edited book that could compete with any traditionally published on bookstore shelves today.”

    Success Transpires In Big and Small Ways

    O’Dwyer admits she, like most authors, dreams of hitting the New York Times bestseller list, but she also finds success in the small things. “Being able to take a concept and plot it out, create likable characters, and keep your reader turning the page is something most only dream about,” she says. “Once the book was published, I received that validation in the form of an email. Yes, I actually started receiving fan mail. How thrilling is that?”

    Recognition for her writing is rewarding, but O’Dwyer knows that appreciation doesn’t happen without a lot of hard work. “I had no idea how time-consuming it is to market your book, but it’s one of the most important elements to success in the publishing industry,” she explains. “New York publishers have an advantage with marketing, having years of experience and contacts with booksellers. But I’ve learned that even big publishers, with all their marketing dollars, will not give debut novelists a large marketing budget. It’s still up to the author to market her book.”

    Print_Relentless_HiRes_300dpiSuccessful marketing means people discover your book, read it, and become fans. “I recently received an invitation to do a book signing in April with about six other authors, including one of the most prolific romance authors in the world, Nora Roberts. I’m still pinching myself,” she says. “Nora’s husband has a bookstore, Turn the Page, in Boonsboro, Maryland. My debut novel Relentless has sold well there, and I think that helped me get this opportunity. It’s is all about putting yourself out there and taking risks and not being afraid of failure.”

    The attention means one thing to O’Dwyer—she is accomplishing her mission. “If my stories can enlighten those to a travesty such as horse slaughter or give hope to others who may suffer from the criminal acts of domestic violence, then I’ve succeeded. And the positive reviews and the requests from fans waiting for the release of Defiant only reinforces my future success. It’s a very exciting time.”

    Writing is a Continual Learning Process

    After writing and self-publishing two books and working towards finishing her third, Forsaken, O’Dwyer has learned a lot. “Like anything else, [writing a book] takes practice and commitment. Writing is a craft, and with time, your writing becomes better, sharper, and stronger,” she says. “There are some writers who plot as they go. I thought I was one of them, but I realized I was wrong. I’ve found that having a well thought-out outline works best for me. It cuts the writing process in half.”

    It’s a continual learning process, one that will always present challenges. “Marketing continues to be a learning curve for me. I try not to let it consume me. After all, if you don’t have more products to sell, marketing will only get you so far.”

    Plus, with the right help, these challenges can be overcome. “I definitely recommend joining a writer’s critique group, which has been invaluable to me. The members of my group are brutally honest, which I appreciate. Their candor has made me a better writer. I also highly recommend writers invest in creating a library of resources, such as The Writer’s Journey (3rd Edition) by Christopher Vogle, Writing the Breakout Novel by Donald Maass, Revising Fiction by Kirt Hickman, The First Five Pages by Noah Lukeman, and because I write romantic suspense, Writing Romance (3rd Edition) by Vanessa Grant.”

    O’Dwyer advises not to forget a good editing team. “In today’s market, I find whether you are seeking traditional publishing or self-publishing, you must have your manuscripts professionally edited and copyedited if you want to compete. I’m fortunate to have found Ally and Ambitious Enterprises in that regard.”

    Aspiring writers can find inspiration in O’Dwyer’s path towards two successfully self-published books. “Follow your dream,” she says. “I never had any formal training as a writer, just the desire to write and put my thoughts and stories on the computer screen. Just remember, writing is a journey that never ends.”


    Relentless
    is available in hardcover and Kindle editions at Amazon.com, and Defiant, just released on February 14, is also available in the Kindle format. However, if you’d like part of the proceeds of your purchase to go to horse rescue organizations, you’ll need to buy the books from O’Dwyer’s website, www.blacksirenbooks.com. From there, you can choose which rescue organization you’d like to support from an extensive list of partners.

    Join in the discussion and have a chance to win a hardcover edition of Defiant or Relentless! We’ll choose two winners from those who comment below.

    Filed Under: Book Marketing, Latest News, Self-Publishing Tagged With: Defiant, marketing your self-published book, P.J. O'Dwyer, publishing advice, publishing romantic suspense, Relentless, self-publish, self-publishing, self-publishing an ebook, success story

    Success Story: Eric D. Goodman

    Novelist Eric D. Goodman calls his book “a novel in stories.” Tracks is set on a train traveling from Baltimore to Chicago. Each story is told from the perspective of a passenger on the train. They are the strangers we meet every day: a soldier, a salesman, a former mobster, a Holocaust survivor, couples in love, a woman who has lost her parents, a poet, a hit man. The stories in Tracks stand alone, but they become stronger when linked together.  Tracks is all about how people—even strangers on a train—can touch one another in meaningful ways.

    Eric began writing Tracks five years ago, during NaNoWriMo. He wrote about 60,000 words that year, then went on to add and subtract stories, rewrite and revise, until he had a final draft ready to take to publishers. “The nice thing about NaNoWriMo,” Eric says, “is that you’re forced to write even when you’re not sure you have it all figured out. And for a first draft, that’s good. Tracks is a different, and better, book than that original draft. But the original draft helped make it possible.”

    As much as Eric wanted to have a published book, he decided against self-publishing. “I felt like in order to ‘make it,’ I needed the validation of an independent literary agent and publisher,” he explains. Although he believed in his novel, he thought it would be difficult to attract readers without the support of an agent and publisher. “I probably would have been published years ago if I’d gone the self-publishing route. But I’m glad I held out and finally secured a literary agent and book deal,” he says.

    Eric had submitted other manuscripts to publishers before, so he knew how difficult it would be to find a publisher. He wrote lots of query letters to agents over the years until he finally found one who fell in love with Tracks. He signed with DSM Agency in New York City, and they began pitching Tracks to publishers. Eventually, Atticus Books made an offer, and a year later, they published Tracks.

    Tracks headshotAlthough he hasn’t hit any bestseller lists yet, sales have been good. But even more satisfying has been the reaction from reviewers, other writers, and most importantly, his readers. “I was overwhelmed to get endorsements from such great writers as Madison Smartt Bell, Thomas Steinbeck, Victoria Patterson, Jessica Anya Blau, Bathsheba Monk, and Yona Zeldis McDonough,” Eric relates. “And good reviews in literary journals and from book bloggers are fulfilling. It also feels wonderful every time I get an email or note or comment from someone telling me how much they enjoyed the book, or talking emotionally about a character from Tracks. Touching readers enough to prompt them to reach out…that’s one of the great joys of writing fiction.”

    Lessons You Can Learn from Eric’s Success

    Understand the importance of starting small. As he published more of his short stories in literary journals, Eric slowly began gaining ground and legitimacy when submitting book-length manuscripts. He believes he may have published a book sooner if he’d focused more on short fiction earlier in his career.

    Reading other writers improves your own writing. “Read as much as you can within your own genre. Read the authors you love,” Eric recommends. “And branch out to read some things you might not ordinarily read, just to get the pulse of what is selling and what agents and publishers (and readers) are looking for.”

    Don’t put off writing until your idea is perfect. “The first draft is spillage, or brain-dump. That’s the clay you’ll mold into something beautiful later.”

    Which brings us back to why movements like NaNoWriMo are so effective! Don’t worry about being perfect as you push on towards your goal of writing 50,000 words. Just keep writing to get your words and thoughts on paper. Reach this goal, and with a little hard work in the editing and revising department, you could be the next NaNoWriMo author who ends up with a published book.

    Be sure to check out the book, Tracks: A Novel in Stories, by Eric D. Goodman, published by Atticus Books. To learn more, please visit the Tracks website: www.TracksNovel.com.

    Ally Machate Book EditorFounder of The Writer’s Ally, Ally E. Machate is a bestselling book collaborator, award-winning editor, and expert publishing consultant who loves using her insider knowledge and experience with the publishing industry to lead serious authors toward success. She and her team live to help make great books happen, whether that means showing a writer how to improve a manuscript, get an agent, or self-publish; or coaching an author on growing her platform to sell more books. Since 1999, she has supported hundreds of authors on their publishing journey and takes pride in serving as their books’ best ally.

    Filed Under: Get Published, Latest News Tagged With: Ally Machate, NaNoWriMo, National Novel Writing Month, publishing advice, success story

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