"Sometimes it's so difficult to untangle a scene or put your finger on exactly why something is working or not working—much less explain it to the author. But Ally's comments and suggestions were all right-on-target. Her kind understanding of my work has been of inestimable value to me. Her interest has simply been to make my work the best it can be. I am certain that her insights have improved my novel and I can't imagine what I would have done without her guidance." Jane Guill, author of Nectar From a Stone